Awaiting | Short Life Poem | Creative Writing July 31, 2016December 16, 2022 Rajlakshmi14 And in the darkness breathes a dream of flickering light. ‘crammed in emptiness’– a w a i t i n g – When you hold on to a dream for so long that even the darkness feels like home. Hope is what keeps us going, isn’t it? Share this:PinterestTwitterEmailWhatsAppLike this:Like Loading...
I had to read it thrice to get the meaning! But its so subtle and powerful and matches the image. Nicely done! I have to try learn this as I just go on and on…you get the idea 😉 Loading... Reply
That's a lovely photo to go with the verse, Raj. "Crammed in emptiness" – what a creative phrase! Hugs! Loading... Reply
Lovely , where did you take this picture
Welcome back to your muse. So much imagery in the poem! Love it.
I like picture and awesome lines describing it
I had to read it thrice to get the meaning! But its so subtle and powerful and matches the image.
Nicely done! I have to try learn this as I just go on and on…you get the idea 😉
Beautiful! The capture and the verse!
Beautiful. It speaks to the soul:)
reflective words. Kind of resonates in me. Loved it.
That's a lovely photo to go with the verse, Raj. "Crammed in emptiness" – what a creative phrase! Hugs!
Beautiful. Poetry after a long time.
Beautiful picture and awesome lines describing it.