Your eyes,
Bedazzle me,
That mischievous twinkle
Makes me envisage unknown dreams,
Will you let our forever build in time?
Will our fingers ever entwine?
Awaiting an answer
Trembles, flutters,
my heart.
Rictameter is a scheme similar to Cinquain. Starting your first line with a two syllable word, you then consecutively increase the number of syllables per line by two. i.e. 2, 4, 6, 8, 10 Then down again, 8, 6, 4, 2 Making the final line the same two syllable word you began with.
::Don’t Miss out on previous poetry types::
Day 1 – A for Acrostic
Day 2 – B for Blitz
Day 3 – C for CinqTroisDecaLaRhyme
Day 6 – F for Florette
Day 7 – G for Ghazal
Day 8 – H for Haiku
Day 9 – I for Inverted Refrain
Day 10 – J for Joseph Star
Day 11 – K for Kyrielle
Day 12 – L for Lanturne
Day 13 – M for Minute Poetry
Day 14 – N for Nove Otto
Day 15 – O for Octelle
Day 16 – P for Palindrome
Day 17 – Q for Quatrain
What a beautiful love poem! Gentle, sweet and curious 🙂
How beautiful and very sweet
Wow!!! Seriously Wow!!! Start to end I didn't even blink an eye and I have read it like 5 times already!
~S(t)ri
Participant|AtoZ Challenge 2014
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That's really quite a nice poem. I never knew much about poetry, I just know I like the "feel" of things or not. And I LOVE the feeling with this one. Nicely done.
wow
Good to learn so many kinds of poems. This one is so bful
Dropping by from A to z and now following ur blog
good luck
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The flutter and fantasy of young love- how eloquently captured <3
Wow sweet this is
R for Ready-Random Thoughts Naba
Love your rictameter, Such a sweet poem.
I'm learning so much here – love the rictameter.
When this A-Z is over I'm going to catch up on your other posts.
Very artistic both the poem and patttern
PhenoMenon
http://throodalookingglass.com/2014/04/risotto/