Reminiscing sorrows of yesteryear,
is futile my dear, spread your wings,
and soar without fear,
Their stony eyes would again stare,
but in awe and reverence.
Maybe their dispassionate heart,
might stumble upon fortuitous love.
And they would too follow your dreams,
chasing a distant star-trail,
flowing through the seams
Blinded are thoughts,
by norms of past,
muffle their Insipid gossip,
For you have smiles to carve,
hope to catch and memories to engrave,
Stay strong, my little Dream weaver.
Poetry Form – Shape Poem
This is absolutely BRILLIANT. I love it 🙂 Thank you so much for linking up to Prose for Thought – sorry I am late in commenting and I hope that you will be back to link up this week 🙂 x
Meaningful poem that reverbate through the soul. Btw, how do u come up with visual image of shape poetry>
Meaningful esp. the last stanza
@Michelle
indeed.. that's how one will succeed. Thank you so much 🙂
@Akanksha
awww thanks a lot girl 😀 your words made me smile
@Rat
{umm I don't knw what to call you so just Rat :)} Thank you so much 😀
@Neelam
Thank you so much 😀
@sulekha
aww thank you so much 😀
@Nabanita
Thank you so much. 😀
@Ritesh
thank you so for your wonderful words. I am pretty sure you will be able to write some cool poetry 😀
@Atreyee
thank you so much for liking it
@Lynette
Glad you liked it 😀 Thanks for visiting
@dxbnidblog
thank you so much 😀 keep visiting
@Morgan
thank you so much
@Sheetal
thanks a lot 😀
@Maddy
thank you so much … that's one of my fav line 😀
@Rallentanda
Thanks a lot .. glad you enjoyed it 🙂
@Brian
hehehe glad it made you smile. Thank you 😀
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@Lacomente
thank you so much. Glad you visited my blog
creatively as good as the form. Quite a take. 🙂
awesome creativity..!! wonderful poem…!
Now thats what i called Mastery. Astounding creativity and poem. Keep it up!!
I love the premise of this….that we should chase our dreams no matter what others say.
That pic got me staring at it…. oh and good words there though I am not the best person to judge poetry you know…that's one area of writing I am still unable to master and i think i never will
This is such a creative post … Thanks for sharing…!
The creativity of your post is amazing…lovely poem
amazing way of presenting,very beautiful poem. dxbnidblog
Terrific poem and I do like your take on life…:)
Beautifully expressed and what fantastic presentation-wow!
Fab! I love how it looks, it makes the message twice as powerful! I love the line 'chasing a distant star trail': I think we should all do that! #Prose4T
Wow! That was so creative 🙂
Great poem and fantastic way of presenting it. #Prose4T
Poetically conveyed…
Lovely!
Wah!! What a creativity! Lovely work 🙂
a beautiful take on the prompt 🙂
stay strong my little dreamer….made me smiles….and the concrete poetry, is so very cool….
Your shape poem is amazing.I enjoyed the spirit of it very much.