Jim and Josie’s relationship had changed dramatically over
the past few months. Jim had made one mistake which turned their life
topsy-turvy, he was miserable as communication with his wife had become
exceedingly painful. His friends had advised him to let go, but he didn’t have the
strength, she was afterall his soulmate.
the past few months. Jim had made one mistake which turned their life
topsy-turvy, he was miserable as communication with his wife had become
exceedingly painful. His friends had advised him to let go, but he didn’t have the
strength, she was afterall his soulmate.
Today, on occasion of their wedding anniversary, Jim poured Sangria
into two tall glasses while Josie stared blankly at him, he gulped down his
drink, drowning his inner turmoil.
into two tall glasses while Josie stared blankly at him, he gulped down his
drink, drowning his inner turmoil.
A pregnant silence ensued, the whirring sound of life
support was the only proof of her being alive.
support was the only proof of her being alive.
@Bjorn
Loved your hopeful vision of their future 🙂 Thank you for visiting.
@Comic Husband
Thank you so much 😀 Welcome to my blog.
@Kathy
thank you so much 🙂
@PS Joshi
Thank you for your comments. Glad you like it 🙂
@Anjana
@Ranu
@Rochelle
thank you so much for visiting 🙂
@Atreyee
Thank you Atreyee 🙂
@Glynis
Welcome to my blog. Thank you 🙂
@Patrick
yeah a loyal husband… a strong bond. Thank you for visiting.
@Soumya
thank you for dropping by 🙂
@cshowers
glad you liked it. Thank you 🙂
@Sandra
thank you for visiting
@Lizy
corrected. Thank you for pointing out 🙂
@silentlyheardonce
thank you 🙂 do visit again
@Megz
yeah re accident 🙂
@RedHanded
awww … but glad since that was the intent 😛
Wow! I just read a couple of blog posts … and the last sentence really makes you go … well, wow! 🙂
Really well written.
I so hope for a turn for the better… these things happens, and maybe a year from now, they will enjoy the drinks together.
Dear Rajlakshmi,
That was an unexpected ending that went straight for the heart. Very well done.
shalom,
Rochelle
I loved your story.
Touching….sad! Beautifully written…
A well-written story with a sad twist at the end which explained everything. Very good.
Oh, what a sad twist. Loved your story!! ♥
Too sad. A loyal husband. Good for him.
A very sad story, but told so well.
Such a poignant piece!
A very sad story well told. One minor point – I think the silence would have 'ensued'. 🙂
Sadly grim.
This was so sad. It was very well written.
Ohh this pierced my heart!
Beautiful 🙂
This made me a bit sad .. 🙁
Accident ho gaya rabba rabba!!
A touching and sad story.Very well told.