Cold wind pierced through Trish’s skin as she rushed to the bus
stop. Bubbling with anger she had stormed out of Sam’s apartment. The break up
was imminent. She was shivering and, sobbing for being so blind.
stop. Bubbling with anger she had stormed out of Sam’s apartment. The break up
was imminent. She was shivering and, sobbing for being so blind.
A gentle tap startled her. Looking up she met a pair of grey
eyes.
eyes.
“You must be cold Love”, he said and wrapped his coat around her shoulders. Trish
hesitated but let the warm fabric envelop her.
hesitated but let the warm fabric envelop her.
He smiled before walking away, dissolving into the dark.
His genuine concern touched her. She resolved they won’t
just be strangers in the night.
just be strangers in the night.
******************
They weren’t.
@Ayesha
Thanks a lot for visiting 🙂
beautiful!! 😀
short and sweet..:)
Thanks Payal. Keep visiting
A lot like love, been written with so much love and passion. An ode to feeling that melt the heart. Kudos, Rajlakshmi:)
Aww thank you so much for your kind words. 😀
Oh1 That was so beautiful , caring and concern touch the heart.
Thank you Kalpana.. I am glad you like the story
Wow! The beauty and power of kindness! 🙂
Thank you Shilpa. Y up kindness is a powerful quality
You said it perfectly in the right number of words!!
Thank you Renuka. I had to cut down so many lines to keep the story within the word limit 🙂
short and apt! Nicely done 🙂
Thank You Nabanita . Glad to have you in my blog
Very nice! So short and beautiful! 🙂
Thank you Preeti … keep visiting
Rajlakshmi this is a cute little story. Loved reading it!
Thank you so much…I had been thinking what to write for this prompt for long
That was beautiful!!
Thank you 🙂