The rage in Sharmi’s eyes was understandable. Her husband
was at the door, with the woman she had thrown out a week ago. Their once
peaceful home was chaotic, further proved by her dishevelled appearance. Hitesh
was aware of his wife’s stony glare, but he had to take a stand. His life
turned topsy-turvy since the day Rumila was asked never to step in their house.
Sharmiβs constant bickering over matters as little as tea-stained cups was
driving him crazy.
was at the door, with the woman she had thrown out a week ago. Their once
peaceful home was chaotic, further proved by her dishevelled appearance. Hitesh
was aware of his wife’s stony glare, but he had to take a stand. His life
turned topsy-turvy since the day Rumila was asked never to step in their house.
Sharmiβs constant bickering over matters as little as tea-stained cups was
driving him crazy.
βSorryβ, Rumila mumbled. Sharmiβs anger evaporated in a
second.
second.
She had the last laugh as Rumila β the maid was back.
Prompt
Clever, very clever..!!
That's really very well written….
Aah! the story of our lives!!
Good one! π
Maid-woe..totally unexpected, I swear. Love the twist!!!
http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/01/28/100-words-on-saturday-20144
gahahahaahahaha…..unexpected!
BRILLIANT!
@Nabanita
yeah π thanks π
@Magiceye
thank you so much π
@Kalpana
I am so glad you liked it π thank you.
What a brilliant twist! loved every word of it.
Maid(made) in India .
lol! That was brilliant!!
Ohh tha Maid-en woes π