Theirs was a smooth relationship, but little did she know
that compromises are priced heavily.
that compromises are priced heavily.
The white coat reminded of promises made – to herself. Yet, she was reluctant. He was her soulmate.
The roaring waves reflected her inner turmoil.
“I am so selfish”, she thought.
For once, Sheena let the sand slip between her fingers.
*************
The story is open to interpretation. Sheena might have
been selfish and left her love for her duty as a doctor, or she was selfish and
left her duty for the love of her life. Well, I hope I am making sense.
been selfish and left her love for her duty as a doctor, or she was selfish and
left her duty for the love of her life. Well, I hope I am making sense.
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at Write Tribe – 55 on Friday
at Write Tribe – 55 on Friday
Prompt – Little Did she know.
Aah left to reader's interpretation 🙂 Good one!
Thank you insignia
loved it…and was pleased to see an open end 🙂
Thanks for visiting karan
Open-ended story. Very rare.
I'm glad at least somebody is writing in this form.
I was so glad to read your comment.thank you so much
One of the best stories (and sometimes the most frustrating ones) are those that leave the readers guessing at the end. The readers interpret (or choose) according to who/what they are.
As far as this story is concerned, I only hope she did not regret her choice, years later.
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Yeah I love stories with open endings like lady n the tiger. They are frustrating yet haunting.thanks for the visit
I want to think of the first interpretation!! Follows my line of thought!
I second Nabanita!!
Nice one for the prompt, Raj! 🙂
Thank you do much Shilpa
@redhanded hehehe I was pretty sure you would think that way. Thanks 😀
the postscript made sense… like the film which has two endings!! 😛
@arch thanks a lot 😀 I hope some producer sees this comment
She left her practice as a Doctor for the one she loves…?
It's nice to leave the reader guessing 🙂
Well up to the reader to decide 🙂 I would prefer that she follows her ambition. Thanks for the visit Nabanita