Fireflies melt
into moon-eyed shadows
howling lullabies
of nocturne,
fidgety squirrels
s u t e
c t l
in tiny cracks
of a Fallen Oak,
tracing Orion.
The woods were lovely,
once,
when the night
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a blueberry sky,
while Venus kissed
gurgling fountains,
and Sirius picked
wild mushrooms.
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hi dear, yes I am still alive lol, just so busy these days, this was superb xxx keep well.
love the way you structured your poem. Fidgety squirrels scuttle – that created a cute picture.
What a poem! the beautiful poem transported me to fairy land for a while.
Beautiful imagery, exciting structure and great use of colour.
Wonderful write.
Love your structure – the way it adds to the words. I'll have to try that one of these days!
I love the way you've used the layout of the letters to add another dimension 🙂
I think I have just read one of the most beautiful pieces of poetry I have read in a long time! So wonderful, loved this! xoxo
Blueberry sky :)! <3
oh so nice…love the rolling down blueberry sky and the picking of wild mushrooms…this is lovely..
nice…beautiful visuals…love the concrete aspect and i really like the intimacy with mythology or astrology there in the end…