The poem is a result of conference chat with my hopelessly crazy friends. The first para was given by a friend and he asked me to write a song (not a poem) in simple language.
There are a few, but they aren’t like you..
I can do without me, but not without you!
love is priceless, cannot be bought for a cost..
hold on to it, before its all lost
hand in hand, let us sail to a place,
where sun drowns in an orange haze,
Let us lie beneath a moonlit night,
Our dreams dancing side by side
I trace my lifeline etched on your palm,
while you look at me, innocently calm,
smiling broadly, yeah it’s true
There are a few, but they aren’t like you
stealing glances by the shore,
diving into the ocean’s floor,
through your eyes I would love to view,
my life can go on but not without you!
amazing poetry.
keep it up.
that is what true love is made of. 🙂
Awesome poem. Love this very well.
Well Said!
This is beautiful and powefol… Vet assertive and full of passion!
Great post!
~L
Love and enchantment bring such lovely melodies and words, doesn't it! 🙂
:I trace my lifeline etched on your palm:
Love it 😀
This is profound and beautiful.
love the rhyming.
I enjoyed reading that! Thanks.
how charming is that?! precious! 🙂
oh nice…what a warm and happy love song…enjoyed it
this has a nice rhythm to it…and some warm and fanciful imagery as well…nice…