Delightfully crafted,
unwinding in layers
of subconscious
-Memories-
And then,
Brutally snatched,
lost in hollow,
of daunting past.
Blank.
-Memories-
A Jig saw puzzle,
though missing
pieces few ,
but Brother,
don’t you worry
we can always
paint some new.
** Dedicated to a loved one, who lost a part of his memory.
I was awarded Perfect Poet at Thursday Rally Week 58 – Thank you so much 😀 I would like to nominate – Rachana
loss of memory is a big loss, and yes you can always create new ones. lovely way of looking at it raj.
Happy ne wyear 🙂
enjoyed it 🙂
Starting anew is a gift indeed.
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/12/30/my-heart-sings/
what would we do without hope? quite a hopeful piece! enjoy the rally!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/souls-paradise/
You speak truly both of loss and compensation. That's what friends are for!
Very nice..last line is the best..we can always paint some new
Beautiful message to your brother! Nicely written!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/another-will-be-born/
Well a New Year is coming … time to make new memories 🙂
Namaste
The anchor 'Blank' was perfect in the middle. A great connection there… yes… we can always live our life in now and burst forth in color every day…
thanks for sharing… Happy New Year My friend. May the year bring you Happiness, Peace, love and prosperity.
Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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nice…we can always paint anew…a fresh start and sometimes that is better than the memories…
nice..love the idea of painting new memories or better…living new memories..smiles
Losing memory can be very tough on anyone. Well written poetry and congratulations for being the perfect poet.