In the wake of long shadows
rose the moon, beside shreds of
-dreamless stars-
tracing back a frail trail
lost in obscurity –
-unfathomable-
Dreams, suspended among,
dense unceasing thoughts
-dethroned-
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Haunting, evocative soulful journey — lost within the dream of never fully realized its own unfathomable self. Beautiful,,,
joanny
This is fabulous,
love your creativity,
the imagery is breath taking…
A++
Has the sense of a soul wending its way through eternity.
Very soulful… Beautiful use of words…
deep!!! all the best
There's a timelessness to this; everything tracing its frail trail.
I like it.
A 'dethroned' dream – what a haunting image that is.
Beautiful and melancholy…
beautiful.. splendid..
"dense unceasing thoughts"
nice work..keep `em coming!
There was something very soulful and melancholic about this one, Raji.. Felt it!!
Just too beautiful a poem for words!!