Dusky horizon,
recalls Youthful yester years,
A Time so yonder,
yeaning yanky days,
of yellow petals and yacht,
gentle waves of time.
Writtem for the Z-A in 26 Days Challenge at I Rhyme Without Reason
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I really like your style how your each form of poetry has nature's reference. There are so many associations yet simple lines. Very pretty and neat way of writing
Great piece for the Y. Amazing use of the words! Keep up the good work!
Well written.. nice Haikus..these!
smart word play.
xx
inspiring!
"smiles of a summer night" – just a soft and beautiful description.
I can see it all – the violet shadows, the moss, the maples…lovely!
A poetic memoir. The alliteration and use of yellow ads much to the sense of looking back. Well done! 🙂 Thank you!
Amazing alliteration without being forced. Good poem.
Victoria
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nostalgic take, Raji 🙂 we all remember those yester years for sure.. and you involved so many Y words in these haikus..
I don't think it, I know you are a wonderful poet 🙂
Hi!
Just happened to stumble upon your blog and went through even some of your previous poems – I think you are a wonderful poet 🙂
Lovely lines 😀 😀
Do keep writing 🙂 I will definitely visit again!!