Waves
crashing
against the
silver shoreline,
echoing memories of yesterdays.
Gently trickles down a solitary
tear of unborn
dream, sleeping
in my
eyes.
Picture clicked today at Beach.
**A tetractys is a complete thought written in 20 syllables.1st line 1 syllable, 2nd line 2, 3rd line 3, 4th line 4, 5th line 10 .
A tetractys can also be inverted for a 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 count, and also given the snowflake form – two verses of complete thought, one in the 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 form, followed by the 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 form.
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-natures-elements-air.html
Greetings!
It is Monday again, I sincerely invite you to join us for a Monday Poetry Potluck party, bring in 1 to 3 poem treats to share via the link on the top! You could use an old poem.
Very well done.. I enjoyed the picture of your verse…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Very attractive words—and photograph is impressive.
simply fabulous. your poetic skill is enchanting.
trisha
beatiful poem…. i loved it…
Raj,
You hit right on spot.
JP