Beautiful Morn(Etheree)
Dews
shimmer
shimmer
as sunbeams
sprinkle warmth on
sleepy canvas of
tangerine horizon;
blinking, yawning milieu wakes,
feathers flutter higher, chirping
a song of life, dancing to the tune
that embraces another beautiful morn.
*Wrote it a long time back – 2009/4/22
**The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.
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Happy Saturday!
such a vivid piece about mornings. which i see almost every day. well done
Cool form and your poem makes me look forward to embracing a new day 🙂
I love the etheree form and yours is a beauty!
ah!! a lovely poem 🙂
enjoyed it a lot 😀
sweet write 🙂
I love this form, and you have done such a great job with it in this poem. I could almost see the sunrise and hear the birds.
I always love to learn different forms…this one I will try for sure. The piece is very good, I enjoyed the flow, and the feel of the world waking is such a good feeling. Well done.
Happy Thursday, Dear.
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I can feel that sunrise coming up and I am enveloped in those beautiful colors! This is a wonderful poetry form one I have never tried and now I think I have to. thank you for sharing and explaining it, it looks like a great challenge!
crisp lines that stay true to the poem and image.. lovely morning for sure! 😀