Thursday Poet’s Rally ::Beautiful Morn::

Beautiful Morn(Etheree)

 

Dews
shimmer

as sunbeams
sprinkle warmth on
sleepy canvas of
tangerine horizon;
blinking, yawning milieu wakes,
feathers flutter higher, chirping
a song of life, dancing to the tune
that embraces another beautiful morn.

*Wrote it a long time back – 2009/4/22

**The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.
If you wish to participate, simply drop a comment at Jingle’s blog 🙂

30 thoughts on “Thursday Poet’s Rally ::Beautiful Morn::

  1. Hello, friend, how are you?

    I invite you to our Monday Poetry Potluck Party,
    We have other features such as poem of the week, poetry blog of the week, and poet of the week, plus Sunday poetry news dispatch, if you attend our Monday Party, there is a chance that you poetry or you as a promising poet are represented by one of our officials, and your talent will be highlighted or exposed to wider audience,

    No specific rules, simply linking in 1 to 3 poems, it could be an old poem, let us read and comment for you. Feel free tasting other poetry treats, all enjoyable experience…

    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/poetry-potluck-big-bang.html

    Click on the link, you will see a blue button, click on the blue button, you will see three boxes, your specific poem link to be placed in first, then your name or blog name, then your email connected to your blog….

    Happy Monday!
    Let the fun begin!
    Cheers!

  2. I always love to learn different forms…this one I will try for sure. The piece is very good, I enjoyed the flow, and the feel of the world waking is such a good feeling. Well done.

  3. I can feel that sunrise coming up and I am enveloped in those beautiful colors! This is a wonderful poetry form one I have never tried and now I think I have to. thank you for sharing and explaining it, it looks like a great challenge!

  4. What beautiful portrayal of a lovely morning.. so refreshing..
    Your words out to be framed and put up on the wall to read the 1st thing in the morning..

    Very refreshing

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