Souvenir
Tears
Aching
Broken heart
Crushed hope smashed dreams,
The sad souvenir of falling in love.
**A tetractys is a complete thought written in 20 syllables.
1st line 1 syllable
2nd line 2
3rd line 3
4th line 4
5th line 10
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Beautiful! Like to try this poetry form 🙂
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/27/the-celebrate-poet-of-september-award-nomination-announcement/
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please vote when you have a moment,
you are nominated, automatically, u win 1 vote,
when you vote for other poets, u win another vote for yourself,
thanks for the attention.
No, Lakshmi, a broken heart never mends.. the scars remain.. as you rightly said, the souvenirs remain always.
That hit a sore spot. 🙂 ~Punam
Brilliant! Brilliant! Few words.. but a world unfolded!
I am here:
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2010/09/11/memories-rain/
I really loved your 20 syllable poem, Rajlakshmi. I am now inspired to give it a try.
Thanks so much for sharing.