Souvenir
Tears
Aching
Broken heart
Crushed hope smashed dreams,
The sad souvenir of falling in love.
**A tetractys is a complete thought written in 20 syllables.
1st line 1 syllable
2nd line 2
3rd line 3
4th line 4
5th line 10
Image: Google
this really was sad raj. very touching.
A great little poem and an education too (:
That pic did it for me…tied the poem to a beautiful place
Simply checking…
make sure to return favors to poets,
Thanks for the beautiful participation.
Happy Tuesday!
Loved this one as well it is now easy getting thought in to syllables this confined, I will keep trying. BTW loved the last line on this one!
how are you?
return favors to those you did not originally reach..
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/monday-poetry-potluck-kings-queens-and.html
Hello, friend:
Our Monday Poetry Potluck Is NOW open, linking is open from Sunday 8pm to Tuesday, 8pm, welcome join us by linking in 1 to 3 poems, you could use an old poem, the more you share, the happier we are…hurry up!
Thanks in advance.
Hope to see you soon…
its the worst souvenir, but not a regular one, thankfully! 🙂 nice new form for me to try! 😀 thanks Raji..!
Rally Week 29, My Poem
Short but deep.
I love how a short poem that could last long like this.
Thumbs up.
And thanks for sharing a bit about Tetractys. ^^
Happy rally.
http://acrossdhitzuniverse.wordpress.com/2010/09/25/silogisme/
wonderful
man that is way too deep… I would love to be able to write like that… all I can do is the variety that I do…