A Dream Sleeps
Under wreaths of heaven blue
a dream sleeps in whisper,
on canvas of melancholia.
a dream sleeps in whisper,
on canvas of melancholia.
Crashing against the coarse shore,
thousand hues of horizon
diffuse into timeless wait,
A moon-dust sprinkled silhouette
walks along pragmatic corridors
towards eternal solitude,
towards eternal solitude,
…and beyond.
Miscarriaged Chimera.
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Was nominated for Perfect Poet award Week 19 by Megz at Jingle’s Thursday Poet’s Rally
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I would like to nominate Jingle … for writing lovely poems and taking so much effort to make this rally a success 🙂
a dream sleeps in whisper! wonderful usage.
lovely poem too!
Mystical!
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What a gorgeous poem and wonderfull nomination.
Oh my! this is so powerful!
Loved this part
"A moon-dust sprinkled silhouette
walks along pragmatic corridors
towards eternal solitude"
Wonderful! keep writing!
'thousand hues of horizon
diffuse into timeless wait'
This is my favourite part. Very impressive
Very nice.
Thanks for sharing. I hope you will visit my sites:
Tim Keeton – A Writer's Tale
and
The Undead Poets Society
Rhyme on!
Tim Keeton
(Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
A Week 19 Perfect Poet Award Winner
A really nice command of the English language you string together words in a magical way.
Came by jingle today,
Joanny
Lovely flow of words1
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Beautiful poem evoking a sense of wonder and desolation. Enjoyed very much. Thanks
amazing, best read of the day, u are superb, congrqats on ur award xxx
you closing words dropped the floor out from beneath me…powerful stuff today…
What a visually provocative poem this is! I love: moon-dust sprinkled silhouette. Well done!
diffuse to timeless wait — wonderful image of a sleeping dream – thank you for sharing this image…..bkm
I am checking on who you nominate,
find out is is me…
thank you for the kind intention.
Cheers!
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Under wreaths of heaven blue
a dream sleeps in whisper,
on canvas of melancholia.
What an incredible image!
very compact poem!
powerful words!
Thank you for the nomination and acceptance of the award.
Have fun!
😉