Will you still love me tomorrow?
Years welcome with wrinkled embrace,
blossoms have withered, shrinking grace,
from destiny, smiles I borrow,
and watch them shimmer in your eyes,
moment enclosing for goodbyes,
will your heart then drown in sorrow?
Uncertainty clouds, dream sublime,
with unceasing rhythm of time,
will you still love me tomorrow?
Poetry Form:
Nove OttoThe Nove Otto poetry form was created by Scott J. Alcorn. It is a nine-lined poem with 8 syllables per line (isosyllabic). The rhyme scheme is as follows: aacbbcddc.
This is my first time and I hope I am doing it right 🙂 … Its wonderful platform for poets to participate and interact with each other 🙂
I also choose Promising Poet award… specially made by Jingle…
And would like to pass them on to :
1) Megzone
3) Brian Miller
4) Willian
5) Pat
10) Jaymie Thorne
11) Artiste7
12) moondustwriter
Do check out there blogs… they are awesome poets 🙂
that is a truly beautiful poem. At times when working on a structured form, many lose sight of the 'beauty'. Not so with yours – absolutely beautiful!
the poetry was sensitive and beautiful
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no no its not my first… but first time i thursday rally 🙂
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ao manyyy awards 😀
thank you so muchhhhh !!! 😀
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another award wowww 😀
thanks a lot madam 🙂
Wow..There is such simplicity and such depth in your words…Lovely read!
Thank you so much for the award.. im sorry i was not able to comment sooner… 🙂
you have written such a cute and lovely poem… 🙂
Hey..
Nice One..
P.S. Award for you waiting on my blog.. 🙂
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/06/jingles-happy-moments-cross-culture-poetry-award/
here is the link!
not able to understand the poem.. 🙁 🙁
Congrats on the award 🙂 🙂
how r you?
an award 4 u in my blog.
magic in the words :)..
urs..hemu..
awe thanks dear for this award how kind, wow never knew u had 2 blogs this one is as nice as the other, I will treasure this xx
Didn't know about that! Very well expressed:) must've been challenging no?!
Nice work dear. I know how difficult it is choose the right words as it has to rhyme in a poem.all the best.
Wow! Thatz beautiful 🙂 Done it so well in those 9 lines!
Loved the quote on award!
Beautiful Write Up!!
hi Rajlakshmi!
nice poem and i can't believe that's your first one.
😉
an award is waiting 4 u in my forever friends post,
please enjoy!
I appreciate your time and effort in participating week 8 Rally.
uncertainty comes when time changes, most of the time, yes, love remains…awesome question!
beautifully done!
ya know it was just lovely…i think they will. smiles.
thanks for the nod as well with the award.
A lovely poem. Welcome to the fun and thank you for the award.
Cool poem indeed.
congrats to everyone
soothing poem 🙂
well written & rich in vocab as usual …
keep blogging
cheers !!!
good work always happy to meet another rhymer poet also thanks for the award. Your skill has earned you a place on my blogroll.
Hello Raji
I know it's good!!! I'm not up on style lol,it's interesting when you say I love and get it back.But when the changes of life kick in then comes "Will you Love me Still" wonderful poem I really enjoyed the read. Thank you so much for "honoring" me with this award!!!!!
WOW!
Amazing write.
Thanks for introducing to this form of poetry.
Always a pleasure reading your verses.
suppperrrbbb… princesss… simply marvelous…
thanks for the award.. and here's a homecoming award for you too… 😀
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/03/04/thursday-poets-rally-enraptured-enchantments/