Will you still love me tomorrow?
Years welcome with wrinkled embrace,
blossoms have withered, shrinking grace,
from destiny, smiles I borrow,
and watch them shimmer in your eyes,
moment enclosing for goodbyes,
will your heart then drown in sorrow?
Uncertainty clouds, dream sublime,
with unceasing rhythm of time,
will you still love me tomorrow?
Poetry Form:
Nove OttoThe Nove Otto poetry form was created by Scott J. Alcorn. It is a nine-lined poem with 8 syllables per line (isosyllabic). The rhyme scheme is as follows: aacbbcddc.
This is my first time and I hope I am doing it right 🙂 … Its wonderful platform for poets to participate and interact with each other 🙂
I also choose Promising Poet award… specially made by Jingle…
And would like to pass them on to :
1) Megzone
3) Brian Miller
4) Willian
5) Pat
10) Jaymie Thorne
11) Artiste7
12) moondustwriter
Do check out there blogs… they are awesome poets 🙂
that is a truly beautiful poem. At times when working on a structured form, many lose sight of the 'beauty'. Not so with yours – absolutely beautiful!
the poetry was sensitive and beautiful
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@CG
thank you so much 😀