The Unknown
Psychedelic dreams haunt
damp corridors of
unknown.
I am broke, repaying interest
of smiles, borrowed
from destiny.
Reflections claw
solitute –
my only solace.
“Once upon a time” ended abruply.
Heart became the Unknown,
when? I don’t remember.
Superb. The structure is excellent. The points about repaying interest of smiles and being broke, and solitude being the only solace are so heart rending. Wow! I am touched.
Wow! This is fantastic
Brilliant work…
🙂
wow~~ i was blown away!! this one is good!
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Never knew u hd a poetry blog too 😛
Nice one 🙂
hi
dont use the word Psychedelic too much 😉
Oh my what a poem, I have chills and somehow I feel lucky to be one of the people reading this!
good poem
esp.
"Reflections claw
solitute –
my only solace."
perfectly embodies the title without being obvious
Raj this was beautiful, best poem I have read today by a long chalk xxx
whooaaa…!!! brilliant..
lovely verses.. 😀
kaise karti ho princess…thoda apna ashirwad muje bhi dedo 😛
Excellent Write Up 🙂 🙂