::Memory Lane::
Tiny puddles
paper boats
laughter echoed, drenched by evening drizzles
warm blankets, delicacies, candy laced fingers
chasing rainbow
trapped in
soap bubbles
Bruised knees
ruffled tresses
watched butterflies flying by,and wondered
if it envied my childish carefreeness
distant images
slowly flicker
rusted memories
long forgotten
summer dreams
shimmering from memory lane, beckons me
reverberates , chorus of nostalgic songs
past – present
slowly gravitates
invincible time.
Form – Trinet
The Trinet, created by zion, is a form with these specifications:
Line 1 – 2 words
Line 2 – 2 words
Line 3 – 6 words
Line 4 – 6 words
Line 5 – 2 words
Line 6 – 2 words
Line 7 – 2 words
Repeat this pattern 2 more times, if centered correctly it looks like three crosses.
Very nice. Memories are so precious. A very pleasant post.
@creativity
@Sankoobaba
thank you so much 😀
awesome yaar..
this "trinet thing"
and esp. "carefreeness" really liked it..
Woww 🙂 🙂 Excellent Write Up!!!!!!!
@william
thank you so much 🙂
I am so glad you liked it 🙂
@Ayu
will definately visit 🙂
thanks a lot 🙂
wow..this is fantastic~! its the first time ive read something like this!!
you're really good 🙂
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this was very clever, im unable tow rite many forms of poetry and I admire people like you who can, I applaud u , bravo xx