Darkness was threatening to consume her.
Echoing in her ears were lullabies once sung by her mother. Torturous pain seared through the tiny mass as someone pulled her leg. Ruthlessly she was dragged out in her final moments.
Blank.
Murdered by betrayal.
“Abortion successful”.
** Won 3rd place in 55 Fiction Writing contest by The Colors Magazine…
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You can read other entries here 🙂
** It is my first work of fiction and first ever 55 fiction 🙂
such a nice try at fiction 55.. cant believe it's your first :O too good and Congrats!!!
@Kabya
@SEV
thanks a lot 😀
Good stuff!
wow…*speechless for while*…amazing…
@Miss Nobody
@Brian
Thanks a lot 😀 do keep visiting 😀
Great, great piece. The fact that it is your first time is amazing. Keep writing. Like your blog. You have a new reader.
This was awesome.Great writing!Keep more coming
@Kavita
@Lena
@Kanagu
Thank you so much 🙂
Glad that you liked it 🙂
@Antarman
@Swaram
Thanks a lot guys 😀
nice receive such encouraging comments 🙂
@Satish
Thank you so much 🙂
keep visiting 🙂
cheers 😀
@SG
Awww but your words do said it all
thank you so much 😀
hey.. this is awesome.. 🙂
congrats on the awards.. truly desevered one 🙂
keep writing 🙂
Once again congratulations!
Wonderfully done!
Painful truth…touched my heart.
Congratulations on your award..well deserved.
OMG! That ws so well expressed 🙁
Congrats girl! U totally deserve the award!
Awesome..shatters the mind completely.
Congratulations on the award Rajlakshmi. Even though this is only a fiction, I am struggling to find proper words to express my deep sorrow.
Hey this was one of the best 55-fictions i have come across 🙂
Really thoughtful post yaar….
love ur blog 🙂
u have a new follower 🙂
keep blogging
cheers!!!!