twirls a wilted leaf
shoved into grim solitude
BREEZE OF BETRAYAL
shoved into grim solitude
twirls a wilted leaf
**Thanks Zoya for pointing out.. I hope it sounds better now 🙂
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Thank you for the encouragement…
@Zoya…
actually even i was bothered abt that line… didnt come up with anything so posted as it is… thanks for pointing it out… will surely rethink it 🙂
'swayed into void solitude '
/ please rethink this line (& i hope my pointers don't annoy u )..
a beautiful idea ..
Yeah, I can feel all the emotions here, betrayal, sadness, and solitude, what a combination.
There’s a sadness to this, but lovely words.