Away from the disapproving eyes of the world, they met. She would
share her deepest desires with him.
share her deepest desires with him.
They thought their rendezvous was a secret.
But, her parents had forbidden her to meet him. She never
understood their dislike. He was a perfect match, her Mr Right.
understood their dislike. He was a perfect match, her Mr Right.
She called him Sam. They called him Schizophrenia.
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I came up with this plot while writing for #A2ZFiction on
Twitter started by @Precarious_me
Twitter started by @Precarious_me
Rewrote the story for 55 Fiction Festival of Words at WriteTribe
Oh that's a creatively done little story! Very nice, Rajlakshmi!
Nice one , Rajlakshmi.
WOW! Simply WOW! Superbly done. Take a bow, Raj. 🙂
LOVED it! What a casual way to toss that last line in. 🙂
hehehe I was wondering if the last line felt that way or not… and you said it 😀
thank you so much 😀
Love it and fodder for thought:)
Indeed. So will you be writing the rest of the story 😛
thanks a lot for dropping by
This is some really good writing!
awww I am so happy to hear that 😀 thank you so much 😀
Ah. good one here..
Thank you so much Jyotsna
love knows no boundaries…Rest is luck!
true… lady luck sometimes play hard 🙂
thanks a lot for writing in
The end took me by surprise! Nice attempt!
thank you so much 😀
made me dig the google for the disorder.. thanks!..
hahaha 😀 seems that's your word for the day 😀 thank you for dropping by
Wow. This one was awesome.
hehe thank you so much 😀
Uh huh. That's Stgma personified.
I guess it is … thanks for visiting 🙂
love can indeed be scarily blind!
truly said 🙂 thank you so much for writing in
Perfect friend not so perfect, after all! Great story 🙂
Glad you liked the story 🙂 thank you
An unexpected end.
thank you so much 🙂
Oh wow! This was awesome 🙂
awww thank you Soumya
Great post! Goosebumps inducing one really…..
glad you felt that way 😀 thank you so much 🙂
Well-written! Perfect ending for a 55 fiction 🙂
GBU
Arti
glad to see you here 🙂 thank you so much
Very nicely done Rajlakshmi
thank you so much for writing in 🙂
Nice! so much in so few words.
that's sweet 🙂 thank you so much
Nicely written.
thank you Ushaji
Good one. Interesting end.
thank you so much 🙂
Surprising end.
that was the purpose 🙂 thank you
Omg! What is happening?
Well she is hallucinating 🙂
thanks for writing in
This completely took me by surprise! Really good 🙂
mission accomplished 😀
thank you so much
Aah! Her distorted reality!! Good one, Raj 🙂
yup a distorted reality …thank you so much Shilpa
Nice one!
thank you