Escape

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 10; the tenth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.


Form – Shape Poetry
** Here I have tried to express the feeling of a women who had lost her loved one long time back… each day she had spent in pain and loneliness, and her only escape from the solitude was when she breathe her last.

  **Please click on the image for better view








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49 thoughts on “Escape

  1. Great going gal! I am sorry, I wanted to but forgot mentioning your name in my vote where I mentioned about all those whose posts I really liked (I had reading through-out the week, and my method was in a complete disarray!).

    It was a wonderful way of expression and such beautiful words too! πŸ™‚

    Keep it up, and teach me too? πŸ˜€

  2. @Blabberblah
    /I love how the petals slowly fall off the flower, as she escapes to a world of 'no pain'// πŸ˜€
    thanks a lot for the kind words πŸ˜€

    @Rumya
    //Is this type of Shape Poetry called Calligramme// as a matter of fact I google the word πŸ˜›
    i knew this as shape poetry… seems the both are same πŸ˜€
    thanks a lot πŸ˜€

  3. @JD
    //first time with "shape poetry" and I love it// πŸ˜€ you will love it even more if you start writing one πŸ˜€
    thanks a lot πŸ˜€

    @The fool
    /making full use of visual media. Best of luck for the Blog-a-ton.// πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
    // I am in dilemma whether to vote for your creativity // its an honour that you gave it a thought πŸ˜€
    thank you so much πŸ˜€

  4. @Sourav
    welcome to my blog πŸ™‚
    thanks a lot πŸ˜€

    @Sushoban
    / the broken petals beautifully carry the message that u want to convey// I am so glad it did… I was actually wondering abt that πŸ˜›
    thank you so much πŸ™‚

  5. @Megzz
    you and your shapes.. and yes now i know why you are late in postin..// arey wo shape sochte sochte time laga… banane mei nahi πŸ˜›
    beautifully portrayed with the broken petals….// thankie thankie πŸ˜€
    /Aal Eez Well.. re Aal eez well // yes yes πŸ˜€
    thanks a lot for such wonderful words πŸ˜€

  6. Hey totally new concept introduced to blog-a-tonics πŸ™‚
    the only prob i hd was in the scnd pic where it was bit confusing as to which petal to read next.. mayb some kind of direction mechanism cud b used.. bt beautiful words woven in2 a beautiful post.. kudos πŸ™‚

  7. Just for my knowledge…Is this type of Shape Poetry called Calligramme??

    Beautiful Reading. Unique way to portray your poem.

    Thanks for the comments on my post. All the Best for B-A-T!! πŸ˜€

  8. Unusual idea, using shape poetry! I love how the petals slowly fall off the flower, as she escapes to a world of 'no pain'. πŸ™‚
    Best of luck for B-A-T!

  9. RL, u r fantastic with these shape poetries. teach me how to do it sometime! πŸ™‚ i'm awed at that creativity actually! well said, illustrated!

    all the best for BATOM!!

    Escape

  10. Lovely! I've tried my hand at these, but gosh, I have no talent! This is talent. Good job Raj! and all the luck with Batom 10!

  11. Amazing. Very creative – making full use of visual media. Best of luck for the Blog-a-ton. I am in dilemma whether to vote for your creativity over a few other literary delights of this blog-a-ton.

  12. great great great….
    a very creative way to express… first time with "shape poetry" and I love it…
    Cheers LIFE
    JD

  13. Oh My My… Princess…
    You are simply tooooo goooddd…
    you and your shapes.. and yes now i know why you are late in postin..
    this much have taken quite some time..
    and the topic.. ishh.. πŸ™
    beautifully portrayed with the broken petals….
    chinta nakko…
    Aal Eez Well.. re Aal eez well πŸ˜€

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